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【高中英语写了篇文章请大家看看有没有错误Ithinktheidaelteachermusthavemanyknowledgefirst,asateacher,musthaveenrichknowledge,second,heshouldfriendlyforeverystudents,heshouldhaveenoughpatientforworsestu】
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高中英语写了篇文章请大家看看有没有错误
Ithinktheidaelteachermusthavemanyknowledgefirst,asateacher,musthaveenrichknowledge,second,heshouldfriendlyforeverystudents,heshouldhaveenoughpatientforworsestudents,becausetheyneedmorehelpinstudy.Theidealteachershouldteachstudentsrightwaysofstudy.Butgeneralspeaking,theoldteacherisbetterthanyoungerteacher,thisismystandardoftheidealteacher
包克亮回答：
theidaelteacher应该是笔误吧,应该用anidealteacher（因为这里不是特指）
knowledge不是可数名词,所以应改为much*（个人建议用profoundknowledge丰富的知识）第一句话你要表达的意思是“我认为一个理想化的教师应该首先有足够的知识,因为必须要有足够的知识才有资格作为老师”.其实这种表达有点啰嗦.我给你一个改编过的,你参考一下把.
Firstly,anidealteachermusthaveprofoundknowledge.Secondly,heshouldbefriendlytoeveryhisfriendsandbepatientwiththebadstudentswhobadlyneedourguideandhelp.Heshouldteachhimeffectivewaysinstudy.Generallyspeaking,however,anelderteacherismorecompetentthantheyoungerone.Thisismyrequirementforanidealteacher.
看来楼主的作文水平还是有待提高的,不过没关系.Practicemakesperfect.
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