仅供参考: 　　如果您还有什么不满意的,请发消息给我,并附上问题的连接, 　　AnAutumnTriptoQianshan-千山秋游 　　LastautumnwetookatriptoQianshanbybus.Itisaboutthirtymilesfromthecity.Weplannedtoputupinahotelthereinordertowatchthesunrisethenextmorning. 　　Assoonaswegotthere,webegantoclimbupthemountains.Howgreatthesightis!Wefeltasifwehadenteredamotherworldfullofbeauty,peaeefulnessandloveliness.Therearehundredsofmountains,oneafteranother.therearemagnificentcliffs,oneaboveanother.Weclimbedupvigorouslyandbreathedthefreshairgreedily.Asthesunwasgoingdown,wedescendedtoalittlehotelatthefootofthehill,wherewehadabigdinner,andthenwenttobedearlysoastoregaintheenergyiortheexpeditionnextmorning. 　　Beforedaybreak,wereachedthepeakofthehighestmountainafterahardgropingandclimbinginthedark.Unawareofthecoldwind,westoodmotionlessly,withoureyesfixingatthehrendoftheeast.Suddenlythinravsofredhuespreadacrossthesky.Astherednessdeepened,somemysteriouscloudsmovedacrossthcsky,dividingheavenfromtheearth.Justatthismoment,upfromthebrighteningfareastrosethesun.Itwassoredandyetsotenderthatwecouldgazeatitwithnakedeyes.andaslightapplausefromus.theamazedspectators,rangthroughthepeak.Up,upitrose,addingtoitselfstrengthandgloryateverystep.Itdazzledwithvigour,drivingawaydarkness,cold,andmiseryfromtheearth,andbringlight,warmth,andhappinesstomen. 　　Wewerecompletelyamazedatthewonderandthegreatnessofnature.Wejumpedandshoutedlikeinnocentchildrenandwebathedinthefirstraysofthesunwiththepeaktillitwastimeforourreturn. 　　千山秋游 　　去年秋天我们乘公共汽车去千山游玩了一次.它距城市大约三十英里.为了第二天早晨看日出,我们计划住在那儿的旅馆里. 　　我们一到那里就开始爬山.那里的景色太美了!我们感到好像进入了另一个世界,一个充满美丽、和平和可爱的世界.那里有数百座山峰鳞次栉比：有壮观的悬崖层出不穷.我们精力充沛地向上攀登,贪婪地呼吸着新鲜空气.当太阳下落时,我们来到山下的一家小旅店,在那里美美地吃了一顿晚饭,然后早早地上床睡觉,以便恢复精力第二天早晨远征. 　　天亮前,我们经过在黑暗中艰难地摸索和爬行到达了最高的山峰.我们一动不动地站在那里,双眼凝视着远处的东方,连寒风也没觉察到.突然间,薄薄的红光在天空中散开,随着红色加深,一些神奇的云朵在天空四散,把天地分开.正在这时,太阳从远处东方的光亮处升起.它是那样红,然而又那么娇嫩以致我们可以用肉眼来观察它.从我们吃惊的观赏者中发出的一阵轻微的欢呼划过山峰,太阳升得越来越高了,每升一步都给它本身增加了力量和光辉.它炫耀着威力,驱走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦难,并给人们带来光明、温暖和幸福. 　　这一奇观和大自然的伟大使我们完全惊愕了.我们像天真的孩子一样跳着、喊着,和山峰一起沐浴在太阳的晨曦中,流连忘返.