问题标题：
帮我看看这段话有没有病句英语的Jimismygoodfriend.Heisthesameasme!Webothlikesportsandwearebothoutgoing.Butnowheisweak.Becauseheisstressedoutforstudy.Heisstressedoutwhenthetestcome.Iwanttohelphim.I
问题描述：
帮我看看这段话有没有病句英语的
Jimismygoodfriend.Heisthesameasme!Webothlikesportsandwearebothoutgoing.Butnowheisweak.Becauseheisstressedoutforstudy.Heisstressedoutwhenthetestcome.Iwanttohelphim.Iamtalkingwithhimwhenheisstressedout.AndIwanttolistentomusicwithhim.AlthoughIwillhelphimtostudybetter!Ithinkhecangetagoodgradeandneverstressedout.
请问总体有没有语病？我的初中考试作文
崔永泉回答：
Heisthesameasme应该改成wehavealotincommon.
不要but.Nowheisweak,becauseheisstressedoutforstudyingsincethetestiscomingsoon.
ItalktohimwhenheisstressedoutandIwanttolistentomusicwithhim.
Ithinkhecangetagoodgradewithoutgettingstressedout.
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