帮忙修改下,主要是语法的错误,最好能解释下错因!谢谢
AnAmericanwhoyearsoverhalfhundred,inordertocompletedwife'swish,inthelastyearshewalkedtocrosstheChineseland,eachtoacity,willtakenout500yuanenterthenativeRedCrosscontributemoneyboxes……
"MywifecanseeeverythingthatIdointhesky"hesaid,"Iam51yearsold,47yearsoldofthewifewhodie,weareallfromtheConnecticutstateoftaughtinahighschool.In1996,IstepedontheChineselandwithOrnanforthefirsttime,sheisveryquickwasdrawnonwithsimplepeopleandbeautifulscenery.TheChildrenthoughhasnomoney,thepencildoesnotgoodtouse,theyunderthemoonlightstudy,havingaclassinthehousethatleakair,verygreat.Afterretiring,wearriveatChina,but,in2002,OrnanislookedupthecancerinShanghai,wereturntotheConnecticutstatetreatment.But,becausethecancercellspread,theOrnantooktolovedearlytoleavemewiththeregret,shespokenherwish——ForChinapoorandlovepassionatelystudyofchildandsimpleChinesestodosomething.Sofrom2005IbeganwalksinChinaalone.Shenzhen,Guangzhou,Sichuan,……Peking,Tienjin,Yunnan,Ihavewalked26stand,eachtoacity,Iwilltakenout500yuanenterthenativeRedCrosscontributemoneyboxes.Itismeaningfultodolikethis,mywifecanseeeverythingthatIdointhesky."
Howthebravethatpersonadmire,heforthesakeoflove,forhelpingthosepoorchildinforeigncountry,hedolikethisofpay!Ican'thaveanylanguagetoexpressmyrespect,IthinkIjustneedtogivethefarawayprayingforhim"wishyoupeaceful!"
引用：问一下,verygreat连同上面的though在这里你想表达什么意思?
解释：是说那些小孩,如此热爱学习,令人觉得很伟大,也就是“很伟大”
引用：hedolikethisofpay!这句不明白
解释：意思为“他如此的付出”
先谢谢了!