问题标题：
请帮忙修改一篇英语文章怕大家看不下去,就分开打了,写的不好,请不要嘲笑.麻烦大家能帮我加些词汇什么的使文章语句完美些.这是下篇：Iamnotoutgoing,soitwaseasyformetobearlonely.Butnow,there
问题描述：
请帮忙修改一篇英语文章
怕大家看不下去,就分开打了,写的不好,请不要嘲笑.麻烦大家能帮我加些词汇什么的使文章语句完美些.
这是下篇：
Iamnotoutgoing,soitwaseasyformetobearlonely.Butnow,thereisabout2410kilometersfrommyhometothisuniversity.Forme,farawayfrommyhomemeansIhavetobearloneyandtakecareofmyself.Allthesethingshavetobedonejustonmyown.
EverytimeIseethemoon,ofcourseItriedmybesttoaviodtoseeit,thefeelingofmissingmyfamilyandfriendscomesbacktomeagain.
Ikeepintouchwithallmyfriends,IdidnothaveenoughcouragetotellthemthatImissthem,Ijustsaidsomefunnythingswhichhappenedheretocovermyrealfeelings.
Lookingatthemoon,missingmyfamilyandfriends,cryingstealthily,doesthesethingshavetofullofmylifewhenIfarawayfrommyhome?
穆效江回答：
Iamnotoutgoing,soitwaseasyformetobearloneliness.Andthedistancebetweenmyhomeandthisuniversity,whichis2410kilometers,makesthesituation(it)evenworse.Forme,beingfarawayfromhomemeansIhavetobearthelonelinessandtakecareofmyself.Allthesethingshavetobedonejustonmyown.EverytimeIseethemoonandtrydesperatelynottomisshomeandfriends,thefeelingofthiskeepshauntingme.(我说,把想家翻来覆去说这么多遍有意义么?既然是想家,统一在一个分段里比较好)
Iamstillintouchwithallmyfriends,butIdonothaveenoughcouragetotellthemthatImissthem.Duringthecall,Ijustsaidsomethingfunnywhichhappenedheretocovermyrealfeelings.
Lookingatthemoon,missingmyfamilyandfriendsandcryingstealthily,dothesethingshavetofillmylifewhenbeingfarawayfromhome?
真情实感倒是有,但是意境没有表达到位.如楼上所言,太中式了.
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