问题标题：
【初中英语作文,求老师纠正点评下~,,主要就是帮忙查看一下作文是否有语法错误.还有就是,作文是20分的满分,求老师毫不吝啬地打下分数,作文主要内容：ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream作文：Recently】
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初中英语作文,求老师纠正点评下~,
,主要就是帮忙查看一下作文是否有语法错误.还有就是,作文是20分的满分,求老师毫不吝啬地打下分数,
作文主要内容：ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream
作文：
Recentlywehaveheldaclassmeetingon"ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream".Ibelievethatmanyclassmatesofminehaveagreatdream,andmetoo.Asthepowerofmucheasierachievingourdreamwhichisgreatest,ImakemymindtostudyharderforgoingtoPekingUniversity.Atthistime,maybeyouwanttoaskme"Whatisyourdream?"Perhapsyouwillbeamazedbymyanswer,butIhavetosaythatmyrootdreamistomakeourcountrystrongerandstronger.Pleasedon'tlaughatme,becausedreamsmustbethefirstandactionslater.I'llstudyharderatschool,readmoregoodbooksathome,andtomakemybrainrunsmorequickly.I'llplaybasketballinmysparetime.Inaword,I'lltrymybest!
卢炜回答：
不用haveheld改用heldmeetingaboutagreatdream===dreamsandmetoo====andsoami中间有一句不晓得你想表明什么rootdream如果你是指最大的愿望或者最主要的愿望的话用maindream比较好最后突然讲到业余时间打...
曲学军回答：
Sohelpfulyouare~,I'llstudyharderandharderwithyourhelp.Thankyouverymuch!
卢炜回答：
我大学英语过了六级的。IhavealreadypassedCET6(CollegeEnglishTestBand6).It'smypleasuretohelpyouwithyourEnglish
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