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【帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..talkaboutplayingplayingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.Herearemyopinions.ithinkplayingincl】
问题描述：
帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..
talkaboutplaying
playingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.
Herearemyopinions.
ithinkplayingincludesalotofdifferentkindsofthings.forexample,playingsportscanhelpuagetingoodhealth.takingawalkisalsoatypeofplaywhichcanloseweighteasily.ofcourse,playinganinstrumentisalsoagoodwayofplaying.Duringthisperiod,wewillnotonlyfeelhappy,butalsolearnalotofknowledge.inashortterm,idobelievethatthere'snothingmoreinterestingandeducationalthanplaying.don'tyouthinkso
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范朝回答：
感觉你的文章太CHINGLISH了,也就是按照中文的逻辑写的,比如说这句话learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.
改成Thisisanimportantthingtolearnhowtoplay
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