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请问我这篇作文有问题吗?MybirthdayisonJuly11,Iwillbeveryhappyonthatday,becausemyfatherboughtmeagift,sistercanbuycakeforme,mymothercookedsomefoodforme.Thiswillbeaniceday.
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请问我这篇作文有问题吗?
MybirthdayisonJuly11,Iwillbeveryhappyonthatday,becausemyfatherboughtmeagift,sistercanbuycakeforme,mymothercookedsomefoodforme.Thiswillbeaniceday.
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