问题标题：
哪位能帮我批改一篇初中英语作文,表达一定要地道一点哦InEnglishclass,weshouldbecarefulwithourstudy（认真对待我们的学习）.Atfirst,itisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.Ifyoumissaclass,youwi
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哪位能帮我批改一篇初中英语作文,表达一定要地道一点哦
InEnglishclass,weshouldbecarefulwithourstudy（认真对待我们的学习）.
Atfirst,itisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.Ifyoumissaclass,youwillhavesomequestionsleft(遗漏下问题).Ifyoucan'tsolvethembyyourself,youwon'tstudyEnglishwell.Whatapity
Afterclass,weshouldtakepartinactivitiesaboutEnglish.
wecanalsospeakEnglishinfrontoftheclass（在全班同学面前说英语）.don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.it'snormal（正常的）andnecessaryforustoimproveourEnglish.Weonlyrememberthatrightone.Themoreyouspeak,themoreyouwanttospeakandthebetteryouspeak.
Finally,takingnotesisagreatway.
Let'shaveatry!
胡林果回答：
1.Ifyoumissalesson,youmayhavesomequestionsleft(遗漏下问题).you"dbettersolvethembyyourself,thenyoucanmakeprogress!
2.Weonlyrememberthatrightone.Themoreyouspeak,themoreyouwanttospeakandthebetteryouspeak.
改为,trytoexpressyouselfinEnglish,themoreyouspeak,themoreyouwanttospeakandthebetteryouspeak.
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