InNationalDays,Iwenttothebeachwithmyparents.Thesunwassoshiningandtheseawassobeautiful.IwassoexcitedthatIranintotheseaassoonaswearrived.AlthoughitwasinOctober,thewaterwasalsosowarminthesea.IfeltverypleasentbecauseIhadnotgoouttoswimfotalongtime.SoIsweamintotheplacethatfarfromthebeach.MyparentsshoutedthatitwasverydangerousthatIswimtothedeepsea.IturnedarroundwhileIheardmyparents. 　　Iwashappyinthatday. 　　这样可以吗? 　　你是初中生?这样应该符合初中生的水平.好麻烦啊,还要考虑实际情况...