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请跟我改改这篇英语文章啊这是我自己写的（我有些对些英语作文没什么自信,Withmanydemandsofstudentsandeducation,everyuniversitiessetupdifferentkindsofelectives,inordertobroadenstudents"enknowledgeandimp
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请跟我改改这篇英语文章啊
这是我自己写的（我有些对些英语作文没什么自信,
Withmanydemandsofstudentsandeducation,everyuniversitiessetupdifferentkindsofelectives,inordertobroadenstudents"enknowledgeandimprovelearning.
Studentschoosedifferentelectivesbecauseofdifferentreasons.Somethinkthatdifferentkindsofelectivessetupistothebenefitofbroadenenknowledge,apartfromthatlearningmoreelectivesisavailabletoapplyajob.theotherthinkthatitcanmakestudents"lifemoreinteresting.
Asforme,myelectiveismakeup.Everygirlisbeautiful.makeupcanhelpusimproveimageandmakeusmoreself-confident.Also,makeupisaart.
胡林回答：
有些事情我真的不太明白你想表达什么,但我还是懂你大部分的东西.帮你改改个人观点：Withtheincreasingdemandsofstudentsandeducation,everyuniversityissettingupdifferentkindsofelectivesinorde...
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