It’scommonnowadaysinsomeschoolsthatstudentstakemobilephoneswiththem.Andpeoplehavedistinctlydifferentideasonthisissue.Somepeopleapproveofit.Firstofallit’sconvenientforstudentstokeepintouchwithfamiliesandfriendsbyusingmobilephones.Itcanalsorelievestudentsofstressfromtimetotime.BesidessomeAPPscanhelpstudentswiththeirstudysuchasYoudaoDictionaryandmusicplayersforlisteningpractice.Howeverothersobjecttoitbecauseit’sagreatdistractionforstudentswhichmaycauseadropingrades.Andaddictedtomobilephonessomestudentsmayspendmuchoftheirsleeptimeplayingwithmobilephones.Inmyopinionstudentsshouldbeallowedtousemobilephonesaslongastheykeepinmindthatstudyistheirmajortask. 　　分析： 　　题目要求根据所给信息用英语给校刊写一篇报道，客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。写作要点包括：支持者的看法；反对者的看法；自己的观点三部分。词数在100词左右，注意开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、原因状语从句、非谓语动词、宾语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。语法方面：范文使用了固定句型it’sconvenientforstudentstokeepintouchwithfamiliesandfriends；原因状语从句becauseit’sagreatdistractionforstudents；定语从句whichmaycauseadropingrades；非谓语动词Andaddictedtomobilephones；条件句aslongastheykeepinmindthat...；宾语从句thatstudyistheirmajortask等语法知识，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；短语和搭配方面：approveofrelieve...of...fromtimetotimehelpwithsuchasobjecttospendmuchtimedoingplaywithbeallowedtodoaslongaskeep...inmind等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实；篇章结构方面：范文注意使用firstofallbesideshoweverinmyopinion等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得很有条理。 　　考点： 　　材料作文