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【雅思大作文求批改Somepeoplesayuniversitystudentsshouldpayfortheirtuitionfees.Someothersaythegovernmentshouldpayforthetuitionfees.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Inpresent-daysociety,itisgenerallyrecognizedth】
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雅思大作文求批改

Somepeoplesayuniversitystudentsshouldpayfortheirtuitionfees.Someothersaythegovernmentshouldpayforthetuitionfees.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

Inpresent-daysociety,itisgenerallyrecognizedthatuniversityeducationasignificantroleinourmodernlife.Butatthesametime,controversyhasarisenaboutwhetherthestudentorthegovernmentisresponsibleforthepaymentofthetuitionfees.

Itisobviousthattherearevariousofreasonsthatthestudentsshouldpayforthefeesbythemselves.Inthefirstplace,thestudentsarethedirectandfinalbeneficiariesofuniversityeducation.Specifically,theultimateobjectiveofuniversityeducationistoservethestudents.Inthesecondplace,thegovernmenthasalreadyshoulderthebasiceducationpayment.Forinstance,studentspaylittlewhentheyareinprimaryandsecondaryschools.atthattime,themajorityexpenditureofeducationarepaidbythegovernment.lastly,thegovernmentneedtoinvestinotherareas,suchasscientificresearch,healthcare,andallofthoseneedaamountofmoney.

Ontheotherhand,thereareseveralaspectsagainsttheargumentsabove.Tobeginwith,itseemsthatpeople,asataxpayer,havealreadyaccomplishedtheirresponsibilitiesanditistheirrighttoenjoytheeducationforfree.Furthermore,thegovernmentistheleaderofthewholecountry.Toprecise,itisresponsibleforthemtoimprovetheeducationleveloftheircitizens.Evenso,thegovernmentburdentoomuchpressure.Forinstance,fundingscientistresearchwhichaccountforabigpartoffinancialoutput.

Toconclude,Ibelievethatthegovernmentandthestudentsshouldsharetheresponsibilitiesoftuitionfees.specifically,thegovernmentpayasmallpartoffeesliketherentofaccommodationandstudentspaytheotherfeesbythemselves.

林云峰回答:
  6.5吧   还是蛮多wrongwords和语法上的问题的   goodluck
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