高中英语改错,急
1.Mywife,Clarissa,haddifferentidea.ShehadsomemodestChristmasgrowingup.Shevividlyrememberedwhenshewas14or15yearsoldandherfatherlostherjobintheconstructionindustry.Sheoverheardherparentstalkedabouthousadlytheywere.Sowhenherparentsaskedherhowshewantedthisyear,shesaid,"Nothing."Whenhermotherinsistedonsheshouldgetsomething,Clarissaaskedforsocks.Soasherfamily'sfinancesimproved,Christmaswentbacktobeingamuchbigproduction.Around10P.M.,Santa(myfuturebrother-in-lawinacostume)showedupwithanenormousbagpresentsandsteppedintoaroomofchildenshoutingwithjoy.
2.Myfathercarriedagenewhichusualcausesblindness.Fifteenyearslater,myfatherbegantolosehercyesightandsodoI.Hewas55yearsold,butIwasonly28.Twoyearslater,wedidblind.Myworldcrumbled,destroyedthedreams.Myfathergavemenotjustfailingeyesight,andanexampleofdeterminationinthefaceofnisfortumeaswell.HeworkedtirelesslytowintherighttogotorheUS.LonelyintheStates,heovercamehishelplessnessandlackEnglishskillstorentasmallapartment,andbuyairlineticketsformymomandme.Hisjourneytaughttomevaluablelessonsfordealingwithmublindnss