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【求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误!这是我刚写的作文,英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助!Anincidenthappenedonmywaytoschoolchangedmealot.Yesterdaymorning,lruntotheundergroundinahurry.Butallofa】
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求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误!这是我刚写的作文,英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助!Anincidenthappenedonmywaytoschoolchangedmealot.Yesterdaymorning,lruntotheundergroundinahurry.Butallofasudden,lfrogottotakethetransportantcardanglhadnomoney.Thatisveryterrible.Later,agoodgirlbroughtonecardforme.Ithankherverymuch.However,shewasdisappearedsoonquickly.Forherfriendlybehaviour,ldidnotlateforschool.Istillrememberherwords,'It'sdoesn'tmatter.'Fromthisthingwhichisfilledwithkindesslknowthatlovecanbefoundeverywhere.Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,weshouldtryourbesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.
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还可以给你简单修改一下语法错误
Anincidentthathappenedonmywaytoschoolhaschangedmealot.
Yesterdaymorning,lhurriedtotheunderground,butallofasuddenlrememberedifrogottotakethePublicTransportantCardwithmeanditwasevenworsethatlhadnomoney.Thatwasveryterrible.Later,agoodgirlswipedthecardforme.Ithankedherverymuch.However,shedisappearedquickly.Becauseofherhelp,lwasnotlateforschool.Istillrememberherwords,'It'sdoesn'tmatter.'Fromthisthingwhichisfilledwithkindesslknowthatlovecanbefoundeverywhere.Asseniorhighschoolstudents,weshouldtryourbesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.
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