问题标题:
【我是初二的学生,写了两篇英语作文,求大神帮我挑挑错ThanksgivingDayiscoming.Iplantothankmymother.Becauseshelookaftermeeveryday.Iamcookingmanyfoodformymother.AndthanIamhelpingmymothertocleanourhouse.I】
问题描述:
我是初二的学生,写了两篇英语作文,求大神帮我挑挑错
ThanksgivingDayiscoming.Iplantothankmymother.Becauseshelookaftermeeveryday.Iamcookingmanyfoodformymother.AndthanIamhelpingmymothertocleanourhouse.Iamgoingshoppingwithmymom.Iwanttosaytomymother"Mother,thankyoualot!Iloveyou"
Ihavetwofriends.TheyareLiMingandZhangHua.THYhavemanydifference.LiMingisoutgoingandfunny.Heoftentakesmelaugh.ButZhangHuaisseriousandcalm.HeisasathleticandfriendlyasLiMing.AndLiMinglikeseatingfruit.ZhangHualikestoeatvegetables.Hedrinksit'sgoodforhishealth.LiMinglikesdrinkingmilk.ButZhangHualikesdrinkingwater.
符丽君回答:
BecauseshelooksaftermeeverydayAndthenIamhelpingmymothertocleanourhouse第一篇作文没有连词作辅助,整篇文章显得是组装起来的IWILL=Igoingto所以这两个词一起用,才不会显得文章单调除了第一句,...
曲蓉霞回答:
嘻嘻~没关系,只要其他对了就好。谢谢你啦
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