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【各位英语达人们,帮我改改这篇英语作文呗.改出我的·语法错误,我是高二学生,可以追分的.DearRam,ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIslandTheconstructionofHainanInternat】
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各位英语达人们,帮我改改这篇英语作文呗.改出我的·语法错误,我是高二学生,可以追分的.
DearRam,
ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIsland
TheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismwillattractmoretouristseveryear,anditwilldevelopthetourism.ManypeopleinHainanhasnotgotgoodjobs,butthisconstructioncanoffermorejobs.
OurHainanisawonderfulcity,afterthisconstruction,Hainanhasbecamemoreandmorebeautiful.Besides,thetrafficinourcityhasbeenbetternow.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatHainanisrealllylikeabiggarden,andasthematteroffact,inmyopion,Hainanisthemostprettyplaceintheworld.DoyouwanttotakeajourneytoHainan,myfriend?
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DearRam,ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIslandTheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismwillattractmore（没有比较的用many要好些）...
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