七年级上英语作文修改三篇文章.Mid-autumnFestivalMid-autumnFestivaliscoming.It'sonthefifteenthdayoftheeighthlunnermonth.BenandKittyhaveaholiday.Theyeatthemooncakes.Therearemanydifferentkingsofmooncakes,s|初中英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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七年级上英语作文修改三篇文章.Mid-autumnFestivalMid-autumnFestivaliscoming.It'sonthefifteenthdayoftheeighthlunnermonth.BenandKittyhaveaholiday.Theyeatthemooncakes.Therearemanydifferentkingsofmooncakes,s

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七年级上英语作文修改

三篇文章.

Mid-autumnFestival

Mid-autumnFestivaliscoming.It'sonthefifteenthdayoftheeighthlunnermonth.BenandKittyhaveaholiday.Theyeatthemooncakes.Therearemanydifferentkingsofmooncakes,suchasthesweetones,thesaltyones.Then,theywatchthemoon.Theyallenjoyit.It'sbigandbeautiful.Andtheyhaveanicedinnerwiththeirfamily.Afterdinner,KittyandBenplaythegameshappily.Atlast,KittyandBenenjoythisfestival.Theywereveryhappy.

Apicnic

LastSunday,BenandKiityinvitedtheirfriendstohaveapicnic.Itissunny.It'swarm.TheywenttotheStarPark.Ittookthemhalfanhourtogotherebybus.Thentheyhadlunch.Theybroughtthehotdogs,drinks,crisps,chickenwingsandateonthegrass.Afterlunch,theyplayedtogether.Theyflewkites,playedthegamesandranfast.Theyfeltverryhappy.Atfouro'clock,theywenthome.Theythoughtthispicnicwasveryinterestingandtheyenjoyedit.

Ahappyday

TodayisSunday,mybirthday.Igotupearly.Andmyfriendscametomyflatatnineo'clock.First,wehadabirthdaycake.Myfriendssangabirthdaysongtome.Iblewthecandlesandcutthecake.Isharedalotofdeliciousfoodanddrinkswithmyfriends.Afterdinner,myfriendsboughtsomepresentsforme.Ilikethemverymuch.Thenweplayedgameshappily.WeenjoyedwatchingTV.Whatahappydaywehad.

句子漂亮点噢!改动后大概意思和这差不多,但是生词别出现的太多.是七年级噢~

麻烦大家改下谢谢嘞

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　　Mid-autumnFestival 　　Mid-autumnFestivaliscoming.It'sonthefifteenthdayoftheeighth【ofAugustonlunnercalinder.BenandKittyhaveaholiday.Theyeatthemooncakes.Therearemanydifferentkings【kinds】ofmooncakes,suchasthesweetones,thesaltyones.Then,theywatchthemoon.Theyallenjoyit.It'sbigandbeautiful.Andtheyhaveanicedinnerwiththeirfamily.Afterdinner,KittyandBenplaythegameshappily.Atlast,KittyandBenenjoythisfestival.Theywereveryhappy.【你这篇文要写成什么时态的啊?前面都是一般现在时,最后一句却用过去时.个人认为这篇文章应该用过去时去描述发生过的事,如果你们老师没有特殊要求的话,就用过去时.那么,此文的所有时态都要改成过去时.】　　Apicnic 　　LastSunday,BenandKiityinvitedtheirfriendstohaveapicnic.Itis【was】sunny【andwarm】.TheywenttotheStarPark.Ittookthemhalfanhourtogotherebybus.Thentheyhadlunch.Theybroughtthehotdogs,drinks,crisps,chickenwingsandateonthegrass.Afterlunch,theyplayedtogether.Theyflewkites,playedthegamesandranfast.Theyfeltverryhappy.Atfouro'clock,theywenthome.Theythoughtthispicnicwasveryinterestingandtheyenjoyedit. 　　Ahappyday 　　TodayisSunday,mybirthday.Igotupearly.Andmyfriendscametomyflatatnineo'clock.First,wehad【用bought更好】abirthdaycake.Myfriendssangabirthdaysongtome.Iblewthecandles【out】andcutthecake.Isharedalotofdeliciousfoodanddrinkswithmyfriends.Afterdinner,myfriendsbought【这里最后用brought带来】somepresentsforme.Ilikethemverymuch.Thenweplayedgameshappily.WeenjoyedwatchingTV【together】.Whatahappydaywehad. 　　你作文写得不错,语法错误很少,看来你英语成绩很优秀.

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