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投诉信,帮我看看有语法错误吗?谢谢!投诉信（155）DearSalesManger,IamaseniorintheComputerScienceDepartmentofTsinghuaUniversity.IamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintaboutthebookwhichisentitledPracticalWriti
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投诉信,帮我看看有语法错误吗?谢谢!
投诉信（155）
DearSalesManger,
IamaseniorintheComputerScienceDepartmentofTsinghuaUniversity.IamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintaboutthebookwhichisentitledPracticalWritingandReadingforNETEM.
Thereasonformydissatisfactionisthatthebookisapiratedone.Tobeginwith,muchofmyvaluabletimeandenergyhavebeenwastedinreadingthebooksinceitisquitehardtoidentifymanywordsinthebook.What'smore,Ihavenotbenefitedfromreadingthebooksincesomeofkeystotheexercisesaremisprinted.Underthesecircumstances,Ifinditverynecessarytotellyoutheseproblems.
Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldchangeanewone,preferablyreturnallthemoneybacktome.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely
LiMing
鲁松回答：
DearSalesManager应该改成customerservicemanager,通常salesmanager只管业务,
不处理售后服务的纠纷,除非你是他们的长期客户.
someofkeystotheexercises(keys应该改成answers)
I'dappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldEXchangeforanewone
Thankyouforyourconsideration改成thankyouforyourpromptattention
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