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【修改作文,不只是修改语法错误MynameisXiaoyueLiu.IgraduatedfromNJuniorHighschool.Imissthatplaceverymuch.However,Iamlookingforwardmoretothe3wonderfulyearsthatwearegoingtospendatWHighSchool.Inmyopinion,I】
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修改作文,不只是修改语法错误
MynameisXiaoyueLiu.IgraduatedfromNJuniorHighschool.Imissthatplaceverymuch.However,Iamlookingforwardmoretothe3wonderfulyearsthatwearegoingtospendatWHighSchool.Inmyopinion,I’maveryluckygirl,forthegoodfriendsandmydearrelativeskeepmeascompanyallthetime.WhenImeetwithtroubles,theywillgivemehandsandalwaysonmyside.Becauseofthem,Ibecomemoreextroverted.Ihavemanyhobbies.Iloveplayingthefluteandlisteningtomusic.Ilikepaintingandreadingbooksonpsycholigy.IwanttobeapainterwhenIgrowup.Iwanttousemybrushtospreadhappinesstomanymorepeople.
刘宇安回答：
帮你改了下,因为事实不了解,所以内容上还是只能在你的基础上改,你自己对照一下,我肯定不会写一些“chinglish”的句子的,绝对地道的,相信您识货!MynameisXiaoyueLiu.IgraduatedfromNJuniorHighSchool.Tho...
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