问题标题：
有一篇英语文章,帮忙改下错.Dearsirormadarmiamwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforapositionasaenglishteacher.Iamastudentandwouldbeabletoworkduringwinterandsummervacation.ithinkitmustbedifficulttowork
问题描述：
有一篇英语文章,帮忙改下错.
Dearsirormadarm
iamwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforapositionasaenglishteacher.Iamastudentandwouldbeabletoworkduringwinterandsummervacation.
ithinkitmustbedifficulttoworkasaenglishteacher,becauseyoushouldknowlotsofwords,expressionsandgrammars,but,i'lltrymybesttodoit.Althoughidon'thaveanyexperience,yetienjoyteachingmystudents,i'msatisfiedwithmystudentskonwwhatisay.Althoughworkasaenglishteacherisdifficult,yetienjoytheprocessofteachingenglish.
陈九华回答：
madarm改为madam
english改为English
所有的i改为l
konw改为know
第一句中去掉wouldbe更好些
I’msatisfiedwithmystudentsknowwhatisay改：know前面加who
Althoughwork改为Althoughworking
asa改为asan
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