请帮忙改下这篇雅思作文相信好人有好报~时态和语法错误有哪些并给个雅思分

1罪犯应该应该长期监禁还是应该再教育,并在他们重新进入社会时,做一些社区服务使他们改过自新

Meaturestankenforcriminaloffendersarecrucialones,especiallyforthehealthandpeacecintheseciety.whichwaysadoptto,tobere-educatedorwithlengthyjailterms,hasaslightlydivaricationtosomeextent.Althoughiunderstandthemainpointsofsomedecision-makeraboutkeepingcrimalsinprisoninlongterm,however,idonotbelieveitisthebestoronlywayforthosewhocommitcrimes,andre-educationandrehabilitationthroughlaborseemsmoreproperwithoutconsideringsomespecialcase.

Throughre-education,offendersaregivenachancetoreflectiononwhathadtheydonewonglyandthatcanmendtheirways.Re-education,especiallysomeskillscourse,isconducivetoadaptthesocietyandearntheirlivingforsomeoneswithpooreducationallevel.

Inaddition,similartocommunityserviceprogrammers,rehabilitatedusingisagoodmeansofmakingfulluseofsocialresourceandintegratestructureoflabourpower.

Admittedly,implementingthere-educationonviolatorshavesomepotentialproblems.Theymaycommitcrimesagain.tobemorespecific,somecriminalswhohaveabnormalandevilvaluesandundergocertainphysicalandmentalpains'experiencearedangerousforresidentsintheservicecommunitywheretheoffendsservicethoughlaboursuchasburglaryandtheft.

Overall,ibelievethatifpeopleregardastheoffenderswithoutbiasandprejudiceandencouragethemgetare-educationandrehabilitationbeforereintroducedtosociety,thesocietywillgetmoreandmorestableandthecriminalrateswillbelessandlesslow.

错了一个单词第一个单词是measures手段peace和平呵呵写错了rehabilitationthroughlabor劳动改造是吴建业的写作书里的核心词汇其他我会改崔泽宇朋友还有朋友能帮忙看看吗?