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【帮改篇英语作文,高考标准,并且把错误指出,以matchwinnerloserresult为关键词写自己的经历和感受.WhenIwasaelementarystudent,somuchyoungerthantoday,Iactivelyattenda400mmatch.Inanefforttowinthismatch,Ib】
问题描述：
帮改篇英语作文,高考标准,并且把错误指出,
以matchwinnerloserresult为关键词写自己的经历和感受.
WhenIwasaelementarystudent,somuchyoungerthantoday,Iactivelyattenda400mmatch.Inanefforttowinthismatch,Iboughtnewshoesandpractiseveryhard.Isparednoeffortsindoingitandneglectdmycoresubjects.Thesweatscanpowerfullyprovemyeffortsandtheactioncangivemepower.Ibeliveinitthat:Practisemakesperfect.HardasItried,Ifailedtowinthematch.Ican'taccepttherealityinthefirstplace.IwonderedwhyIdidn'twinthegame.Fortunately,myinnerstrengthgraduallyweathertheresultandIdidn'tcommitsuicide..Frommyperspective,theresultisn'tsoimportantanditisjustifiedforustoenjoytheprocess.Sometimesbealosermaybehelpusbeawinner.
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李尊朝回答：
文章写的很好,有多种句型,倒装句很加分.就有一些小错误,纯属个人意见.不喜勿喷哟1.whenIwasaelementarystudent,这个句子没有错误,但是一般表达最好用：whenIwasinelementary/primaryschool2.practisever...
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