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求帮忙修改一篇高中英语自我介绍请帮忙修改修改.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句,写的差还请谅解,修改很到位的另外加分Helloeveryone.HappyChristmasDay.Mynameisxxx.I
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求帮忙修改一篇高中英语自我介绍
请帮忙修改修改.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句,写的差还请谅解,修改很到位的另外加分
Helloeveryone.HappyChristmasDay.Mynameisxxx.Iamsixteenyearsold.IgraduatefromXXXMiddleSchool.
Inmysparetime.Iliketoreadsomebooks.Ithinkreadingcouldenlargemyknowledge.Imuststudyhardsothatmyten-yearhardworkwillpayoff.IhopeIcanbeadmittedtotheidealuniversity.Ihopewecanworktogethertoprogresstogether.Weshouldn’tletdownourparents.
卢晓菁回答：
一读就知道你的英语基础不太扎实,虽然没多少语法错误但是用词造句比较awkward.不过你年龄还小,有的是机会提高~Helloeveryone,happyChristmasDay!Mynameisxxx,asixteen-year-oldgirl/boy,whohasgraduatedf...
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