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【求英语达人帮忙修改英文句子!1.InNikosKazantakis’sshortstory“AnightinaCalabrianVillage”,Ilearnedthathelpingotherswillletbothfeelthankful.2.TheprotagonistisfromGreece,sohebecameastrangerinItaly.3.Becauser】
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求英语达人帮忙修改英文句子!
1.InNikosKazantakis’sshortstory“AnightinaCalabrianVillage”,Ilearnedthathelpingotherswillletbothfeelthankful.
2.TheprotagonistisfromGreece,sohebecameastrangerinItaly.
3.Becauserainedalldaylong,itwascoldnightoutsidethatmaketheprotagonistfeelcold,wet,tiredandhungry.
4.Theprotagonistwantstohaveaplacetosleepforanight.
5.Beforehecamehere,hisgrandpaalwayslookforstrangersandbringthemhome,sohethoughteveryonewillbeassameashisgrandpa,hewasn’tscaredtocometoItaly.
6.ActuallywhenhecametoItalyhefeelsreallyupset,becausenoonewouldbefriendlytotakeastrangerhome.
这六句话是我自己写的一段完整段落.亲们,帮我把每句的错误都找找吧,有些是病句,有些是大小写问题,选词不当,语法,标点符号,长短句等.亲们帮我找找吧,越多越好.在word里只找到几个,老师却说有很多.
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1.InNikosKazantakis'sshortstory,ANightInaCalabrianVillage,Ilearnedthathelpingcanmakepeopleappreciateeachother.2.TheprotagonistcamefromGreece,sohewasastrangerinItaly.3....
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