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【雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看1Peoplearedisturbedbymassivewaysofimprovinghealth.2However,othersbelievetheincreasinginthenumberofsportsfacilitiescannotguranteethehealthofpublicunlessothermeasuresincluded.】
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雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看
1Peoplearedisturbedbymassivewaysofimprovinghealth.
2However,othersbelievetheincreasinginthenumberofsportsfacilitiescannotguranteethehealthofpublicunlessothermeasuresincluded.
马启波回答：
我不知道是不是楼主自己写的,妄加评论如下：
massive是“巨大的”,形容体积大,如“themassiveiceberg”,与ways不搭,可以用：numerous,various,等；disturbed,打扰,与语境不符,可用puzzled,perplexed
increasing改为increase(可做名词),measures后加are,并且included最后改为taken,要考虑到动名词的习惯搭配.但整句话还是有点怪,因为facilities能不能有number,为绕过这个问题,或许可以改为Theincreasingavailabilityofsportsfacilities
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