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＜初二＞我自己写的短文,找错误,并改Followthemobilephonerules.Inourcountry,weshouldbeservepoblicorder.Now,peopleoftenusemobilephone.Ifyouwanttotalkonmobilephoneatameeting,youshouldgoouttotalk.Ifyouarewith
问题描述：
＜初二＞我自己写的短文,找错误,并改
Followthemobilephonerules.
Inourcountry,weshouldbeservepoblicorder.Now,peopleoftenusemobilephone.Ifyouwanttotalkonmobilephoneatameeting,youshouldgoouttotalk.Ifyouarewithfriends,youshouldkeepyourvoicedown.Ifyougotohospital,youshouldturnoffthemobilephone,becausehospitalneedtoquiet.Talkingloudlyonmobilephone,ifsomeonetalkloudlyonmobilephone.youcansay,wouldyoumindkeepingdownyourvoicedown?
郭天石回答：
的确要改一下,好多单词都还认识,poblic?public,becausehospitalneedtoquiet.不能用BECAUSE,这个原因太明显了,用AS好,aspatientsneedsaquietenviroment,这样好点Followthemobilephonerules.Inourcou...
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