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【（初二）帮我看看英文作文有错误么whenwegrowing,weoftenhavesomepainsandgains.wemustdosomehomeworkandstudyhard,andwehavelesstimetorelaxandplay.sometimeswefeelthemveryboring.myparentsletmeplaythepiano,but】
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（初二）帮我看看英文作文有错误么
whenwegrowing,weoftenhavesomepainsandgains.
wemustdosomehomeworkandstudyhard,andwehavelesstimetorelaxandplay.
sometimeswefeelthemveryboring.
myparentsletmeplaythepiano,butsometimesidon'tlikepiano,ilikedrawing.
theyaremypains.
butihavesomegainstoo.
nowihavelearnedmorekonwledgeangicanplaythepianoverywell.
myparentsoftentakemetoseefireworks.
theywereverybeautiful,ilovethem.
iwilltakepartinacultureartfestivalnextweek,i'mlookingforwardit,becauseiwillplaythepianoonthefestival.
毛成江回答：
when(when改为during,因为你意思是说在成长过程中嘛)wegrowing,weoftenhavesomepainsandgains.
wemustdosomehomeworkandstudyhard,and(and改为but)wehavelesstimetorelaxandplay.
sometimeswefeelthemveryboring.(改为feelveryboringwiththem)
myparentsletmeplaythepiano,butsometimesidon'tlike(加the)piano,ilikedrawing.
theyaremypains.
butihavesomegainstoo(too可以改为atthesametime吧,因为too一般是形容同样一样事,比如说都是好事或者都是坏事,而不能用来说先坏事再好事).
nowihavelearnedmorekonwledgeang(and吧)icanplaythepianoverywell.
myparentsoftentakemetoseefireworks.
theywereverybeautiful,ilovethem.
iwilltakepartinacultureartfestivalnextweek,i'mlookingforwardit,becauseiwillplaythepianoonthefestival.
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