还是一篇作文,帮我看下有没有什么错误的地方或者哪里的语句有更好的改进方法的~

TimefliesandwhenIrealizeditIhavealreadybeenasophomore.LookingbackintothefirstyearIhavespentinthecollege,IcanclearlyfoundthatIhavereallylearnedverymuchandgrownquickly.

Icanstillrememberthefirstseveralweeksinthecollegeandtheyarequitebusyanddifficulttome.Asacollegestudent,Ihavetolearnhowtohandlethelifeandworkandstudywell.IknowIshouldlearntodomostofthethingsbymyself.AtthattimeInearlylostmyself.However,Itriedtostruggleandfinallyfindabetterwaytobalancemyacademiclife.

Duringthisyear,Ijoinedtheschoolstudentunionandtookpartintomanyactivities.AllofthosemademerealizethatIcanalsodomanythingsandmyacademiclifecanbecolorfultoo.

Nowasastudentingradetwo,IamstillnotsurewhatshouldbemylifeplanbutIamsureIwillstilldomybestandkeeptrying.LifeisalwaysfullofchallengesandIwillbeagoodfighter.

这是一篇为口语考试准备的作文,额,要是有错就帮改下啊~不要尽发表些空话.有能力就改给我看.文章写着啊,大二

嗯,是一个关于“change”的口语演讲吧