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英语作文练习,Inafineday,afterhavingpreparedforapicnic,wedroveintothecountryandfoundaquietspot.Themomentwehaddescendedfromourcar,weunpackedourhampersandsataround.Therewereafewwaspsnearus.Thenagreatmanywa
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英语作文练习,
Inafineday,afterhavingpreparedforapicnic,wedroveintothecountryandfoundaquietspot.Themomentwehaddescendedfromourcar,weunpackedourhampersandsataround.
Therewereafewwaspsnearus.Thenagreatmanywaspsgathered,afteroureffortstodrivethemaway.Suddenly,Isawawaspnestinatreenearby,thenweseizedourthingsandreturnedtoourcarassoonaswecould.Pursuedbywasps,wedroveaway.
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Itisafineday.Havingpreparedforapicnic,wedroveintothecountryandfoundaquietspot.Themomentwedescendedfromourcar,weunpackedourhampersandsataround.
Therewereafewwaspsnearus.Thenagreatmanywaspsgathered,afterwhichwemadeoureffortstodrivethemaway.Suddenly,Isawawaspnestinatreenearby,weseizedourthingsandreturnedtoourcarassoonaswecould.Pursuedbywasps,wedroveaway.总体不错,用了不少难句,这个是加分的,但是叙述中then,after等用的太多,完全就是一种记叙,这样不太好.连词尽量少出现.
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