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【哪位好心的英语老师能帮我改一下作文?Mrs.Stonehadspentthewholemorningpickingblackberries.Itwasnearlylunchtime,soshedecidedtomakefoodtoeat.Shewasjustpiecingmeetwhensheheardavoiceintheyardseemedlikeacat.】
问题描述：
哪位好心的英语老师能帮我改一下作文?
Mrs.Stonehadspentthewholemorningpickingblackberries.Itwasnearlylunchtime,soshedecidedtomakefoodtoeat.Shewasjustpiecingmeetwhensheheardavoiceintheyardseemedlikeacat.Thenshesawananimalwhichhaveyellowfurandextremelybig.Sheknowitwasnotacatbecauseitwasfivetimesbigthanacat.Theanimalsuddenlyranawaywhenshesawitandshethoughtitwasgoingtoitshome.Mrs.Stonewantedtoknowwhereitsroomissoshedroppedherbasketandranafterit.Hearingthesound,theanimalrunmorequickly.Afterwhich,Mrs.Stonecouldn'tseeitanymorethensheranallthewayhome.Shetoldherneighboursthatshehadseenahugeanimallikecatbuttheydidnotbelieveher.Shealsotelephonedthepolicebuttheythinkshehadgotmad.
我的英文水平不好,希望老师能帮帮我.
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Thenshesawananimalwhichhaveyellowfurandextremelybig改成Thenshesawananimalwhichhasyellowfuranditisextremelybig.fivetimesbig改成biggerAfterwhich改成Afterthatshehadseenahu...
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