问题标题：
初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（3）TodayisMonday,asobusyday.Inotonlymakealotofforms,butalsoansercostomers'questionsceaselessly.Noonehelpmebesauseeveryonebusytoo.Thanksgod,
问题描述：
初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（3）
TodayisMonday,asobusyday.
Inotonlymakealotofforms,butalsoansercostomers'questionsceaselessly.
Noonehelpmebesauseeveryonebusytoo.
Thanksgod,today'sworkfinallycometoanend.
Now,Ijustwanttogethomeandlieonbed...
马治家回答：
写的不错...按照你的思路给你更改如下
ThisisMonday,averybusyday.
Notonlypagesofformsneedtobefinished,butalsoalotofquestionsarewaitingtobeanseredfrommycustomers(这个是客户你确定?如果是想说老师的话用master`s).
Noonecanhelpme,becauseeveryoneisbusyaswell.
Thanksgod(这个非常口语不能用于书面语你非要用吗?推荐说法如下)
Ifeltsotiredwhenthewholeworkswerefinished.
Ijustwanttogohomenow,lyingonmybedismywholewish.
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