问题标题：
看看这篇作文可以加些什么AForeverFriendIhaveafriend.Sheismybestfriend.Oneday,Iwassad,Ididn'tsayanything.Shesatnexttome.Shedidn'taskmewhyIwascrying.Shetoldmeajokeandshemademelaugh.Ithankedherverymuch.
问题描述：
看看这篇作文可以加些什么
AForeverFriend
Ihaveafriend.Sheismybestfriend.Oneday,Iwassad,Ididn'tsayanything.Shesatnexttome.Shedidn'taskmewhyIwascrying.Shetoldmeajokeandshemademelaugh.Ithankedherverymuch.Becauseofher,Ifelthappy.Sheheldmyhand,andsaid"Don'tbesad,Iwillfollowyouforever."Thisismyfriend,myforeverfriened.
Ifyouhavegotafriend,youfeelhappy.
Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youfeellonely.
Ifyouhaveafriend,whenyouaresad,shemakesyoulaught.
Whenyouarecrying,sheshavesyourtears.
Whenyouareintrouble,shegivesyouahand.
Ifyouhavegotafriend,youmusttreasurethefriendship.
Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youneedtomakefriendssoon.
不够字数啊,帮忙加几句,一句也行
刘立业回答：
你可以在开头加一些你朋友的外表描述.
Ihaveafriend.sheistallandthin.thereisapairofglassesonhernosethatmakeherlearned.andsheisalsoweryfriendly,especiallyforme,becausesheismybestfriend,xxx.
Oneday,Iwastoosad,thatIdidn'tsayanything.Shesawsatnexttome.Shedidn'taskmewhyIwascrying.Shetoldmeajokeandshemademelaugh.thensheaskedmetopiaywithher.afterthaticannotrememberwhylwascryingijustfelthappywithmyfriend.Ithankedherverymuch.Becauseofher,Ifelthappy.Sheheldmyhand,andsaid"Don'tbesad,Iwillfollowyouforever."Thisismyfriend,myforeverfriened.
Ifyouhavegotafriend,youfeelhappy.
Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youfeellonely.
Ifyouhaveafriend,whenyouaresad,shemakesyoulaught.
Whenyouarecrying,sheshavesyourtears.
Whenyouareintrouble,shegivesyouahand.
Ifyouhavegotafriend,youmusttreasurethefriendship.
Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youneedtomakefriendssoon.
你写得挺好的,我只是稍微改了一下,仅供参考!
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