这样的作文能拿几分?
题目：Atpresentitishardforcollegestudentstofindjobs.Manypeopleclaimthatcollegeteachersshouldgiveprioritytopracticalcourseslikecomputerscienceandbusinessoversuchtraditionalonesashistoryandgeography.Towhatextentdoyouagree?Nowadaysitisincreasinglydifficultyforcollegestudentstofindjobs.Manypeopleagreethatnewcouressuchascomputerscienceandbusinessareusefulthanthetraditionalonesandcollegeteachersshouldputthepraticalonespriority.Whileinmyopinion,traditionalonesareassignificantaspraticalones.Aseveryoneknows,tradionalcoureslikeEnglish,maths,historyandgeographyplayavitalroleinourdailylives,wecangetsomeusefulknowledgeandgainnumerouscreativeideasbystudyingtraditionalones.what’smore,traditionalcouresmakeitmuckeasierandmorecomfortablewhenwecommunicatewitheachother,sowehavenochoicebutobayit.Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,practicalcourseshavedrawnmuchattention.Somepeopleevenbelievethatpractialonesaremoremajorthantraditionalones.Howereraccordingtothelatestsuvey,collegestudentswhocantmastertraditionalonescannotgetgoodresultinpractialoneseither.Soitisanundoubtedlyfactthatifpeoplecouldn'tmastertraditionalones,theycouldn'tadapttothenewoneseither.Tosumup.whatImeantbythisisthattraditionalcouresareasessentialaspraticalones.Eachoneshouldnotleavetraditionalonesbehind.Instead,weshouldmasterthemandonlyinthatwaycanwemasterpraticalones