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【帮我改一篇英语作文（初一水平）LifeInTheFutureByDanielHi,I’mDaniel.Ithinkthelifeinthefuturewillbeveryinterestingandcomfortable.Peoplewillliveintheseabecausetheweatherisveryhotinsummerandalittlewarmin】
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帮我改一篇英语作文（初一水平）
LifeInTheFuture
ByDaniel
Hi,I’mDaniel.Ithinkthelifeinthefuturewillbeveryinterestingandcomfortable.
Peoplewillliveintheseabecausetheweatherisveryhotinsummerandalittlewarminwinter.Theycanwalkinthewaterlikefishswiminthewater.Andnoonewilldothedullandheavyjobs.Machineswilldothesejobs.Sopeoplewillhavelotsoffreetimeandtheycanhaveaholiday.
Studentswon’tstudyinschool.Theywillstudyathomewiththeircomputers.Theywillsendtheirhomeworktotheirteachersbyemail.Andtheywilltalktotheirteachersontheircomputers.
Ithinkthisdreamwillbetrue.SoImustworkandstudyhardly.
李林合回答：
swim改为swiming,jobs改为work,因为不是具体的工作.withcomputer改为by,因为是在通过电脑,表方式.true改为cometrue,是梦想实现,而不是梦想是真实地.最后,hardly改为hard,是努力学习.
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