请各位帮我修改一下英语作文一部分,重点修改下语法错误.感激不尽.
Itotallyagreewithoneoftheauthor’sopinionsthatFamilymembersandparentsplayessentialrolesinmarriagesanditisveryimportanttogaintheirapproval.
Aninterculturalmarriagewon’thappenunlessbothsidesaccepteachother.Forinstance,IwatchedaninterviewprogramonTVseveralyearsago.TherewasafamousChinesesingerwhosewifeisUkrainian.Theytalkedalotabouttheirwonderfulmarriageandthingstheyhavedonetolettheirparentsaccepteachother’sculture.TheUkrainiangirltriedtocookChinesefoodandtheChinesesignerlearnedalotofUkrainiansongs.Althoughthegirl’sparentswerenotsatisfiedatfirstbecausetheywereextremelytraditionalpeople,theyeventuallyacceptedthesingerwhentheysawthathewassointerestedinUkrainiancustomsandcivilization.Meanwhile,thesigner’sparentswereverysatisfiedaswellbecausetheUkrainiangirlwasgentleandshowedenoughrespecttothem.Itwasthefamilyapprovalthatcreatedthisromanticinterculturalmarriage.
Onthecontrarytothefirstparagraph,withregardtoacouple,nomatterhowmuchtheyloveeachother,afabulousmarriagewillbeimpossibleiftheirparentscan’tstandorrespectadifferentculture.Taketheworld-famousmovie“Titanic”forexample;JackandRosewerefromtwodifferentcultures.JackgrewupinUSAandkeptwanderingwhileRosewasthedaughterofrichpeople.AlbeitJackandRoseloveeachotherdeeply,Rose’straditionalparentswanthertomarryarichbusinessman.TheydespiseJackbecausehewaspoorandhadnopopularityanddidn’tshowrespecttoJack’sartgift.TheyevenusedespicablemeanstogetJackarrested.Finally,Jacksunkintotheseawiththemagnificentshipandtheirlovestorycametoabadending.
Hereisanotherexample.Myauntoncefellinlovewithahandsomemanandtheydecidedtogetmarriedthreeyearsago.MyauntisfromSouthwesternofChinaandthatmanisfromnortheasternofChina.Nevertheless,hermomjudgedthenorthpeopleasdishonestandirresponsiblewhiletheman’sfatherregardedsouthpeopleasselfish.Myauntthenhadabigargumentwithhermombutwasstillforcedtobreakupwiththeman.Actually,myauntandthathandsomemanarenotbadperson.Thereasonwhytheirparentsmadewrongjudg