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帮我修改篇关于水污染的作文WaterpollutionAsweknow,therearemanyproblemsfacingtheearthsuchasairpollutionwaterpollutionandsoon.InmyviewthebiggestproblemisWaterpollutionItisclearthatlivingthingscan`talive
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帮我修改篇关于水污染的作文
Waterpollution
Asweknow,therearemanyproblemsfacingtheearthsuchasairpollutionwaterpollutionandsoon.InmyviewthebiggestproblemisWaterpollution
Itisclearthatlivingthingscan`talivewithoutwaterIcan`timagethatiftheearthislackofdrinkingwaterhowcanhumanbeingsliveIfnothingsidonetoprotectwater,manmaydie
mostpeoplearoundusstillwastewaterweshoulddowatevertohelpthemknowtheseriousproblemandsavewater.
修改下顺便把后面的补齐
刘泽强回答：
can`talive是can'tlive,或者can'tbealive.water后面应该有句号.sidoneto应该是笔误吧,是is
最后一句whatever后面应该加wecan
此外,应该检查一遍,注意标点,好多该有标点的地方都没有,还有首字母大写.不一一列举了.
是篇不错的作文,比较好.
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