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COOPERATION这篇文章有没有语法错误,请帮改之Onepersonisstillaperson.buttwopeopleareateam.Ateamcandoeverythingthatseemsimpossible.Tosucceedinlife.Wemustiearnthespiritofcooperation.Firstofall.Wecancatchh
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COOPERATION这篇文章有没有语法错误,请帮改之
Onepersonisstillaperson.buttwopeopleareateam.A
teamcandoeverythingthatseemsimpossible.Tosucceedinlife.Wemustiearnthespiritofcooperation.
Firstofall.Wecancatchhappiness,relatiansandfriendshipifwepulltogether.Cooperationmakespeoplesetasidetheirdifferencesandworktogether.Second.asthefamousproverbgoes,“Manyhandsmakelightwork”.Thepowerofonlyonepersonisverysmall,butthepoweroflotspeopleisstrongenoughtoovercomeanydifficutly.Thild.Itiseasiertobesuceessful.Goodcooperationcanmakeusworkfasterandbetter.
Aswecanseethetheabove,hownecesserytobecooperation!Asasayinggoes,Onetreecannotmakeaforest,oneflowercannotmakeaspringButthemostimportantmeansshowingloveforothersItislovethatturnstheearth
这篇文章有没有语法错误,请帮改之
丁艳回答：
我觉得问题不少.
是Toefl的作文吗?
Onepersonisstillaperson,buttwocanmakeupateam.
Ateamcandoanythingthatseemsimpossible.
Tosucceedinlife,wemustlearnthespiritofcooperation.
Firstofall,wecancatchhappiness,relatiansandfriendshipifwe____(你用pulltogether想说什么意思?用法不对)
Cooperationmakespeoplesetasidetheirdifferencesandturntoworktogether.
Secondly,asthefamousproverbgoes,“manyhandsmakelightwork”.
Thepowerofonlyonepersonisverysmall,butthepoweroflotspeopleisstrongenoughtoovercomeanydifficutly.
Thildly,itiseasiertobesuceessful.
Goodcooperationcanmakeusworkfasterandbetter.(Why?Youshouldtalkintothissub-point,asfarasI'mconcerned)
Aswecansee,fromtheabove,hownecesseryitisforustobecooperative!
Asasayinggoes,("onetreecannotmakeaforest,oneflowercannotmakeaspring.ButthemostimportantmeansshowingloveforothersItislovethatturnstheearth')别oldsayinggoes了,上面已经用过这种写作手法了,重复
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