问题标题：
英语短文改错MrGreywasabiologyprofessor,andhehadabigcollectionofrareboneswhichhewasverypround.oneyearhemanagedtogetanewandbetteratanuniversity.asMrGreywasverybusy,hiswifemadethearrangementsforherpos
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英语短文改错MrGreywasabiologyprofessor,andhehadabigcollectionofrareboneswhichhewasverypround.oneyearhemanagedtogetanewandbetteratanuniversity.asMrGreywasverybusy,hiswifemadethearrangementsforherpossessionstobetakeninamovingvantotheirnewhomewhilehewasawayfromwork.thefollowingweekthreemenstartedouttakethethingsoutofMrGrey'shouseandloadingthemintothevanasoneofthembroughtoutalargewoodbox.heisjustabouttothrowitintothevanwuthalltheotherthingswhenMrsGreyranoutfromherhouseandsaid,"pleasetreatthatboxverygentle.thatonehasallmyhusband'sbonesinit"themanwassosurprisedthathenearlydeoppedtheboxonhisfeet.
陈红松回答：
建议调整以下句子：
1、andhehadabigcollectionofrareboneswhichhewasverypround.
pround改为proud,且后面应加上of
2、oneyearhemanagedtogetanewandbetteratanuniversity
句子不完整.应在better后面加job
3、hiswifemadethearrangementsforherpossessionstobetakeninamovingvantotheirnewhomewhilehewasawayfromwork
此句表达混乱,建议修改
4、thefollowingweekthreemenstartedouttakethethingsoutofMrGrey'shouseandloadingthemintothevanasoneofthembroughtoutalargewoodbox.
following改为next
5、heisjustabouttothrowitintothevanwuthalltheotherthingswhenMrsGreyranoutfromherhouse
is改为was
6、pleasetreatthatboxverygentle
gentle改为副词形式gently
7、themanwassosurprisedthathenearlydeoppedtheboxonhisfeet.
deopped改为dropped
陈宏兵回答：
这是我照着卷子抄下来的，有的词是打错了，见笑了。辽宁高开提有改错，都应该改10处错误
陈红松回答：
第一句：proud后面加of第二句：better后面应该还要加个one吧（我看了一下上面老师的答案，他是觉得应该加上job这个词，但是我没有十分看懂这个句子的意思，所以你可以选择用他的答案），如果是at错了的话就改成in。第三句：awayfromwork应该改成awayforwork吧，前者表示的是远离工作之类的，后者才是表示出门工作先写到这里，我一会要去上课了，回来再给你答案。
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