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【谁能帮我修改英文作文TheOpeningSpeechofEnglishFestivalGoodmoningboysandgirls!ThisisfirsttimetheEnglishfestivalholdoninourschool,Iamveryexcitingtostandheretospeak.Withthedevelopmentoftheholdworld,theengl】
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TheOpeningSpeechofEnglishFestival
Goodmoningboysandgirls!ThisisfirsttimetheEnglishfestivalholdoninourschool,Iamveryexcitingtostandheretospeak.Withthedevelopmentoftheholdworld,theenglishbecomeoneofmostimportantlanguagesintheworld,inoffollowingthespeedofworldandmakeourschoolstudenthavemorechancetospeekenglishthenenhanceourabilityoforalenglishandopenoureyesSonowweholdonenglishfestival
TheEnglishfestivalwillholdon10days.InthistendaysweneedspeekEnglishintheschoolIthinkyouwillfeeladifferentatmosphere,thenyouwillfindaslongasyoucanpersistinspeekingEnglishyoucangetwell.
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尽量尊重原意了,就是几个不地道的表达法和语法错误改了一下,其他按照你的意思全没动.
TheOpeningSpeechofEnglishFestival
Goodmoningboysandgirls!ThisisfirsttimetheEnglishfestivalisheldinourschool,Iamveryexcitedandhonoredtostandheretospeak.Withthedevelopmentofthewholeworld,theEnglishhasbecomeoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworld.InordertokeeppacewiththeadvanceoftheinternationalsocietyandofferstudentinourschoolmorechancestospeekEnglishandthusimproveouroralEnglishandbroadenourhorizon,weholdthisEnglishfestival.
Thefestivalwilllastfor10days.InthistendaysweshouldspeekEnglishoncampusasmuchaswecan.Ithinkyouwillfeeladifferentatmosphere,andfindthataslongasyoucanpersistinspeakingEnglishyoucanspeakwell.
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