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Competitionistheessenceformarketeconomy.However,becauseofChineseeconomy’sthetwo-tracksystem,anumberofindustriesandenterprisesdonotreallyparticipateinmarketcompetition,buttheycancontrolthepriceandholdthemarketbytheadvantagesofmonopolyprivilegesandadministrativedepartment’sprotection,soabundantprofitsareacquired.Themonopolydomainincludestelecommunication、electricitycorporation,financeinstitution,insurancecorporation,railwaycorporation,petroleumindustryandotherindustries.Thesemonopoliesestablishvarioustermsforholdingtheirterritoryandpreventingcompetitionfromothers,sothatworkersintheseindustriescangetexcessiveincomes.Atthesametime,theunreasonableadministrativemonopolyrestrictsonanothercompanies’participation.Asaresult,theemploymentratioofthewholesocietydecreases.Theincomegapbetweenpeoplewillbewidenedwhenthoseunreasonablemonopolyincomeincreases.