问题标题：
【下面的英文如何改错.急.Iamsorrytohearthatyourfriendsaidsomethingthatbortheredyouwhenyouwinacontest.Itcandifficulttoknowwhattodowhenyourfrienddosomethinglikethat.Perhapsyoucouldtalkwithyourfriendaboutthi】
问题描述：
下面的英文如何改错.急.
Iamsorrytohearthatyourfriendsaidsomethingthatbortheredyouwhenyouwinacontest.Itcandifficulttoknowwhattodowhenyourfrienddosomethinglikethat.Perhapsyoucouldtalkwithyourfriendaboutthis.Findingatimewhenyoucanspeakatthem.Calmlyexplainwhattheircommentsmadeyoufeel.Theymaynotrealizethattheircommentsbotheredthem.Youcouldtalkwithyourparentsaboutthisaswellasifitcontinuestobotheryou.Yourparentsloveyouverymuchbutwanttohearwhatisonyourminds.Theyareliketohavesomegoodideastosharewithyou.
谷勤回答：
这是一道改错题,还是修改作文?
我当它是一篇需要修改的作文了,以下是我改过之后的：
Iamsorrytohearthatyourfriendsaidsomethingthatbortheredyouwhenyouwonacontest.Itcanbedifficulttoknowwhattodowhenyourfrienddosomethinglikethat.Perhapsyoucouldtalkwithyourfriendaboutitwhenitisconvenienttospeaktothemandcalmlyexplainhowtheircommentsmadeyoufeel.Becausetheymaynotrealizedthattheircommentsbotheredyou.Youcanalsotalkwithyourparentsaboutitifitcontinuestobotheryou.Yourparentsloveyouverymuchandwanttohearwhatisonyourmind.Theyareliketohavesomegoodideastosharewithyou.
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