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英语作文纠错英语作文：以生活方式为题.soyousee,i'munhealthy.idon'tlikevegetablesatall.ineverexercise.butiwanttogetgoodp.e.grades.whocanhelpsmewithmyhealth.myp.e.teachesay,weneeddrinkwaterormilkeveryday,
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英语作文纠错
英语作文：以生活方式为题.
soyousee,i'munhealthy.idon'tlikevegetablesatall.ineverexercise.butiwanttogetgoodp.e.grades.whocanhelpsmewithmyhealth.
myp.e.teachesay,weneeddrinkwaterormilkeveryday,andeatvegetablesatleast4timesaweek.itisgoodforourhealth.asforsleeping.wemustsleep8hourseverynight.exerciseisinteresting.ifwewanttobestrong,weneedexerciseeverymorning.bytheway.youcanbecleverandstrong.
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有错或需要修改的地方有括号括起来,如下：(As)you(may)see,I'munhealthy.Idon'tlikevegetablesatall.Ineverexercise.ButIwanttogetgoodP.E.grades.Whocan(help)mewithmyhealth(?)MyP.E.teac...
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