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我又来了,帮改一下这篇作文啊,写的很烂………Onedayagirlfollowedawhiterabbittofallintoahole.Thenshebeganastrangeandexitingjourney.ShemetmanystrangepeopleandanimalssuchastheMarchHare,Cheshirecat,madhatt
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我又来了,帮改一下这篇作文啊,写的很烂………
Onedayagirlfollowedawhiterabbittofallintoahole.Thenshebeganastrangeandexitingjourney.ShemetmanystrangepeopleandanimalssuchastheMarchHare,Cheshirecat,madhatter,redcardsPeachQueenandsoon.Shecouldeatapieceofcaketobecomeverysmallasakey.Shealsocouldeatonesideofthelargemushroomtobecomelargerthanthetallesttreeintheforest.Sheistheprotagonistinthestorycalled‘Alice'sAdventuresinWonderland’.
ThegirlwasnamedAliceandshewasveryinnocent.Inthecrazyworld,Aliceistheonlypersontokeeptherationalmind.ThestrangeexperiencewasalldreamedbyAlice.Thestorywaswrittenbyvividlanguageanditbroughtreaderstothebeautifulworld.Somanyreaderswereattractedbytheinterestingwonderland.Inthefuture,thisstorywillbelovedbymoreandmorereaders.
胡康回答：
改过后：
Onedayagirlfollowedawhiterabbitintoahole,thenshestartedastrangebutexitingjourney.Shehasmetmanystrangepeopleandanimals,includingtheMarchHare,theCheshirecat,theMadhatter,theRedQueenandsoon.Shecouldbecomesmallerthanakeywheneatingapieceofcakeandlargerthanthetallesttreeintheforestifeatingalargespecialmushroom.Shewastheprotagonistofafamousfairytalebooknamed‘Alice'sAdventureinWonderland’.
Withoutdoubt,thegirlwasAlicewhowasverynaiveandcute.Inthatcrazyworld,Alicewastheonlypersontokeeparationalmind.AllheradventuresintheWonderlandcamefromherowndream.Thestorywaswrittenvividly,whichhasbroughtabeautifulworldtoallofitsreaders.Therefore,manyreaderswereattracteddeeplybytheinterestingbutadventurouswonderland.Ithink,inthenearfuture,thisstorywillbelovedbymoreandmorereaders.
希望可以帮到你的.
黄水霞回答：
另外问一下，《爱丽丝漫游奇境记的读后感》这个标题如何写？
胡康回答：
Myreadingresponseofthebook--'Alice'sAdventureinWonderland’.
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