问题标题：
【求大神修改英语面试自我介绍GeneralIntroductionGoodmorning,everyone.I’mXingYifan,a15-year-oldgirlfromHengshui,Hebei.YoucancallmeIvan.Soundslikeaboy’sname.Anyway,I’dliketouseI-V-A-N,Ivantodescribemyself.Iisinit】
问题描述：
求大神修改英语面试自我介绍
GeneralIntroduction
Goodmorning,everyone.I’mXingYifan,a15-year-oldgirlfromHengshui,Hebei.YoucancallmeIvan.Soundslikeaboy’sname.Anyway,I’dliketouseI-V-A-N,Ivantodescribemyself.Iisinitiative.Itook(用过去时合适吗?)partinmanykindsofactivities.IalsojoinedtheLeague,andbecomeaLeaguebranchsecretary.Iorganizedmyclassmatestomakemanyblackboardnewspapers(办黑板报不会说)andhelpholdmanyparties.Visvirtuous.I’mhonestandoftentrymybesttohelpothers.Aisadaptable.Icaneasilyadapttothesurroundingenvironment.Nisnimble.Icandealwithdifferentkindsofpeople(这两句有点别扭求修改).Besides,Ilikefacingdifficultiesandsolvingthem.Ihaveenoughconfidencepassingtheinterview.(汉化了,不知怎么结尾)
唐玛丽回答：
Goodmorning,everyone.I’mXingYifan,a15-year-oldgirlfromHengshui,Hebei.YoucancallmeIvan.Soundslikeaboy’sname.Anyway,I’dliketouseI-V-A-N,Ivantodescribemyself.Iisinitiative.Ihavetakenpartinmanykindsofactivities.IalsojoinedtheLeague,andbecameaLeaguebranchsecretary.Ihaveorganizedmyclassmatestoblanknewspaperandhelpholdmanyparties.Visvirtuous.I’mhonestandoftentrymybesttohelpothers.Aisadaptable.Icaneasilyadapttothesurroundingenvironment.Nisnimble.Icangetalongwellwithdifferentkindsofpeople(这两句有点别扭求修改).Besides,Ilikefacingdifficultiesandsolvingthem.Itismyhonortoparticipatetheinterview.(这样写显得更加谦虚有礼貌)
最后祝你成功!
秦建军回答：
blanknewspaper是办板报的意思吗？长知识啦~谢谢
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