哪位英语达人帮我修改一下英语作文（按四级水平要求修改）

LIFEINUNIVERSITYANDHIGHSCHOOL

WiththetimepassingbythenIgotaccustomedtotheuniversitylife,Ifindmanydifferencesinuniversitycomparingwiththehighschool.

Firstly,wehavemorerightsofchoice,it’sweourselvestochooseelectedcoursethatweareinterestedin,andnoonearounduswillforceustodowhatwedislike.Secondly,wehavemorefreedom.Forwedon’thavesomanyclasseseachdayasinhighschool,wecantakepartincountlessactivitiesafterschool.Meanwhile,thelifeintheuniversitybringsplentyofchallenges.Onthehand,wehavetolearnknowledgemeanlybyourselves,sincewecanhardlymeetourteachersoutofclass.Ontheotherhand,wehavetospendalotoftimewashingclothes,buyingfood,etc.Thus,whatwecareaboutarenotjuststudyingandplaying.

Consideringthetransformationfromateenagertoanadult,thechangesinthislifestageareessential.Onlywhenweovercomethedifficultiesandgetusedtothechangescanwegrowuptoarealmanwhocanenterandstayinthesocietysuccessfully.AndIbelieveI’lldobetterandbetterinthenextfouryears.