几篇自己写的英语作文请大家指教.
倡议捐钱.
OnMay12nd2008,therewasaearthquakeinSichuan.Manychildrenlosttheisfatherormother.Agreatnumberofschoolarealsocavedin.thestudentcan'tstudyanymore.DoyouhaveanypocketmoneyorlucymoneytodonateIfyoudonateyourloveIthinkthestudentsinSichuanwillhaveachancetostudyandtheywillthankyoufordoingthat.Pleaseraisesomemoney
做菜.
Makesandwich
First,cuttwopiecesofbreadsecond,spreadbutteronthem.Next,spreadsomefeuitsuchaspears,tomatoes,andsoon.Next.putsomelettuceandthebeefslicesonthebread.Afterthat,puttherelishonthebeef.Finally,putanotherpieofbreadonthetop.
不穿校服.
Moetmiddleschoolrequestthestudentstoweartheschooluniformatschool.Butagreatnumberofstudentdon'tliketheschooluniform.Schooluniform'sdesignisnotlikedbythestudent.Theschooluniformcan'tshowstudent'sindividuality.Ithinkschoolshouldchangethesysterm.Thenstudentsmustlikeschoolbetter.
一些语法错误请纠正.