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帮忙看看我的作文有没有什么问题?ThesearetheinterestingresultsofactivitysurveyatNO.10middle.About10percentofallthestudentsdohomeworkeveryday.Infact,theyhavetodohomeworkeveryday.Afewofstudentsdohomework
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帮忙看看我的作文有没有什么问题?
ThesearetheinterestingresultsofactivitysurveyatNO.10middle.About10percentofallthestudentsdohomeworkeveryday.Infact,theyhavetodohomeworkeveryday.Afewofstudentsdohomeworkonlythreeorfourtimesaweek.Noneofthemdohomeworkonceortwiceaweek.Asforplaybasketball,moststudentsplaybasketballonceortwiceaweek.Somestudentsplaybasketballthreeorfourtimesaweek.15percentofthemplaybasketballeveryday.TheyaresoactiveandIthinktheylikeplayingbasketballverymuch.Well,somestudentssurftheInternetthreeorfourtimesaweek.AhalfofthemsurftheInternetonceortwiceaweek.Only10percentofthemsurfintheInterneteveryday.Oh,Ithinkifeverybodyhasplentyoftime,everyonewillsurftheInterneteveryday.
我只是个初中生,大家谁帮偶看看,刚写的作文有什么语法问题?
能不能把不好的句子和错句子单独拿出来改正?我看着眼晕啊~~哦哦
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herearetheinterestingresultsofactivitysurveyatNO.10middleschool.About10percentofallthestudentsdohomeworkeveryday.Infact,theyhavetodohomeworkeveryday.Afewofstudentsdoho...
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