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mytopicisDigtalCamera

Digitalcameraisacameratakesvideoandphotographdigitally.

recordinginmagesviaanelectronicimagesensor

compactdigitalcamerascanrecordsoundandmovingvideoaswellasstillphotographs,Most21stcenturycamerasaredigital.

digitalcamerascandothingsthatfilmcamerascannot.

displayingimagesonascreenimmediatellyaftertheyarerecorded.

storingthousandsofimagesonasinglesmallmomerydevice.

recordingvideowithsound,anddeletingimagestofreestoragespaceitevencancroppictures,andplaysomedigitalmovie.

nowIgonnasaysomethingsaboutDSLR--thedigitalsinglelensreflesxcamera.

DSLRaredigitalCameraBasedofSLR.Because,exceptCCDorflim,theyareworkingwiththesameway.

whenyouareuseingaSLRorDSLR,youcanchangethecameralensforwhatphotographyouwanttoget.

thismakesphotographbecomesmoreinterestingandbeautiful.

Buyadigitalcamera,youcanneverbuyfilmagain.andyoudon'tneedprinteverypicture,justputeminyourPC.