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求改英语作文~嘻嘻...Atonetimeinthepast,Iheardthephrase"whethertravelorreading,thebodyormindmusthaveoneontheroad".Iagreewiththissentence.Theself-cultivationofperson'sneedsthroughtravelorreadingtodevelop.Throug
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求改英语作文~嘻嘻...
Atonetimeinthepast,Iheardthephrase"whethertravelorreading,thebodyormindmusthaveoneontheroad".Iagreewiththissentence.Theself-cultivationofperson'sneedsthroughtravelorreadingtodevelop.Throughtravel,youcanenjoytheculturalcustomsofdifferentplaces,suchasinShanghai,youcanfeelthefast-pacedlifeofaninternationalmetropolisandtheuniquecharmofvariousculturestogetherreflected.IfyouareinXi'an,thenyouwillenjoytheculturalatmospherethathasbeenaccumulatedthousandsofyears.Ifyoulikereading,soproductivesuccessawayfromyouagainintothestep,becauseinthebook,youcanunderstanddifferentpeople'sthoughts.Readingcanmakeyouopen-minded,canmakeyouabetterunderstandingofthingsintheworld.
禤莉明回答：
suchas后面不能加句子,换成Forexample,最后一句改为：Readingcannotonlymakeyouopen-minded,butalsomakeyouhaveabetterunderstandoftheworld!
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